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There on top of the hill,
sits a little apple tree.
With the best one you will ever see,
but on the inside is sour.
Then there is little neglected ugly me,
who has a taste as sweet as can be.

Everyone wants to pick the other,
while no one looks at me.
They go to her every day,
I just sit and rot away.

One time someone saw me,
but just threw a rock my way.
Just some days,
I wish I was the other apple.

Then finally one day,
someone stops and looks at me.
Really looks and doesn't cause pain.
My only question is,
will I finally be picked over the other?

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A little kind of experiment poem. Idk maybe it really is not one of my bests. Yet when I saw that its loved. haha :)

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~squimberrycupcake Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So sweet, and my answer would be "Yes!"
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~moonsand9999 Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconsquimberrycupcake:
~squimberrycupcake Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :D
Thank YOU for the llama :hug:
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:iconmoonsand9999:
~moonsand9999 Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome :la:
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:iconramirez-daughter:
Mood: Wow! *Ramirez-Daughter Sep 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I think it's good.
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:iconmoonsand9999:
~moonsand9999 Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :D I appreciate it :)
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:iconramirez-daughter:
*Ramirez-Daughter Sep 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
welcome
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~briicial Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love it :)
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:iconmoonsand9999:
~moonsand9999 Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks :hug:
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:iconbriicial:
~briicial Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome :)
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