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He stands there
and looks at her.

He doesn't know any more.
What to say,
what to do,
what is right.

He loves her.
But he is
tired of hurting,
Him self and others.

He has no clue what will make it better.
To just leave now
so he wont hurt her any more,
Or stay just to make her like this again later in life.

He is so confused
and yet scared to.

He would never want to loose her.
He at least wants to keep her as a friend.
He can tell her anything and every thing.
He can trust her with it all.

He walks away
mad, sad
but yet acting
like he is happy
so the world will leave him alone.
The second time i had the dream. This time though it was really scary. i could really feel those emotions. I seriously woke up crying.

Side one of this [link]
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:iconbloodbitter:
Bloodbitter Nov 6, 2011  Student Writer
sounds like MY life story haha. Very nice :dummy:
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moonsand9999 Nov 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :la:
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Bloodbitter Nov 7, 2011  Student Writer
welcome :D
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Ailishlovesanime Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is EPIC
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moonsand9999 Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks :D it means a lot to me. There is another side to the same poem [link]
check it out if you want :la:
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Ailishlovesanime Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow ^^; reminds me of my life!!!
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moonsand9999 Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yea its kinda my life right now, but this actually hasnt happened. But i think it might idk. This just came to me in a very vivid dream it i really connected to it..i was kinda creeped by it. haha
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Ailishlovesanime Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... I recently had a dream about my ex that made me wake up crying... it was so weird because I havent talked to him in a year!! But I thought we had something....... I guess he didnt :iconsadplz:
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moonsand9999 Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:( I know what you mean. I have some thing special with this guy right now and we were really close but now hes just backing down a bit. idk what to think anymore
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Ailishlovesanime Nov 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Im sure everything will be ok!! :cuddle:
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